First...Hello! and thank you for inviting me to be your friend!...You had requested some feedback on your site:
I would like to see a picture of you and hear a personal story. Maybe put some more benefit language on the top instead of the bottom? WIIFM? What program did you use to create the site? It doesn't read as easy as some of the other popular ones out there.
(Now the fact that I have this many opinions is EXACTLY why I have not done my own yet!! I am quite particular!! However, congratulations on creating your site! You are way ahead of me!)
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First...Hello! and thank you for inviting me to be your friend!...You had requested some feedback on your site:
I would like to see a picture of you and hear a personal story. Maybe put some more benefit language on the top instead of the bottom? WIIFM? What program did you use to create the site? It doesn't read as easy as some of the other popular ones out there.
(Now the fact that I have this many opinions is EXACTLY why I have not done my own yet!! I am quite particular!! However, congratulations on creating your site! You are way ahead of me!)